memorial

poetry by brantley
11 September 2002
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Blessed are they who are not in pictures because they took them

 
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Blessed are they who make mix tapes

 
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Blessed are they who listen before they speak

 
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Blessed are they who are always late

 
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Blessed are they who are footnoted

 
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Blessed are they who run at breakneck speed into sliding doors

 
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Blessed are they who take others for rides on motorcycles

 
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Blessed are they who write catchy songs

 
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Blessed are they who remember birthdays

 
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Blessed are they who spend days picking out gifts

 
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Blessed are they who spray-paint stop signs

 
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Blessed are they who leave parties last

 
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Blessed are they who feed pigeons

 
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Blessed are they who put extra sheets on sleeping friends

 
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Blessed are they who play devil's advocate

 
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Blessed are they who call at two in the morning

 
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Blessed are they who make bad jokes

 
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Blessed are they who have baggage

 
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Blessed are they who make coffee well

 
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Blessed are they who find the right word

 
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Blessed are they who fix things in the morning

 
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Blessed are they who make things quick

 
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Blessed are they who tape all the episodes

 
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Blessed are they who make elaborate plans

 
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Blessed are they who lay down their lives

 
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As easily as they would mail a postcard home

 
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For them, I will walk barefoot down Broadway

 
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Until I come to the water

 

j_moody: this last set of lines (stanza?) is excellent. i wonder if you could conjure up more of that, maybe? the rest is good, too, but i especially like the last bit.

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jlewis: All right, dammit, Brantley, now you've made me cry. Right here in the lab, too. Very embarrassing, although I suspect I'm not the only one who'll be easily set off today.

Would anyone out there be able/willing to calligraph this for me? :) Seriously, this is pretty amazing, and one of the few memorials I've seen so far that is powerful while being neither mawkish nor hawkish. Thanks for this, this slate-aired, translucent morning.

cutler: Misty eyes over here, too. And I didn't even remember the significance of today until I say the papers this morning. I'm not too excited by or invested in the vast majority of memorial things that are going to happen today, but this one was a welcome surprise. Thank you so much, Brantley.

laura: I didn't initially read this as a September 11th memorial, but I'd already marked it as something I'll stick on my wall to pause over, as a reminder of why it's worth it.

cgroom: I was especially impressed by the last two lines, because they both situate us in the heart of the matter as well as conveying a sudden stop of the poem, the narrator's motion, and the 9/11 events. And yet (Christian optimist that I am) I couldn't help but think of what happens when you reach the water's edge; do you try to walk on it, stare across it, turn around... it's an open ending, very effective.

david_a: I took a few days to digest this. It is very emotionally immediate, but I wanted to see if it held up after the 'Hallmark Card anniversary' was over. Well, it does. What I love most is that I recognize loved ones in all the foibles and traits so effectively piled up like incantations. This contrast between the formally elegiac and the touchingly mundane is very poignant.

alecia: I love how this piece can be read not only in reference to the 9/11 events (blessed are they who are always late, blessed are they who have baggage), but also-- and so much more-- in reference to daily life, to anyone's life (directly affected or not). This is simple and powerful. Thank you for sharing it with us.

samira: Brantley, I did not read this until the 16th, because I spent 9/11 being oriented at the Div School, but this gave me the moment to reflect that I did not take then. Thank you for that. Thank you also for the fact that you did not take any cheep shots for tears--you got them, but not with gimmicks and that is wonderful. Josh, I will ask Laura about calligraphy.

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