2:23:47

poetry by lizzy
04 February 2002
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this morning I overslept

 
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so I had to skip breakfast

 
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or be late to school.

 
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I was late anyway.

 
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then I got my student i.d.

 
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and saw that my photo--

 
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the one that will be in the yearbook--

 
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made me look like some wounded animal.

 
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then I banged my knee on a table

 
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so hard that I bruised it.

 
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they served noodles at lunch

 
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but I hate pasta.

 
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that didn't matter anyway

 
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because they were out of food when I got there

 
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and I was out of change

 
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to buy chips.

 
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then during my break

 
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I fell and re-bruised my knee.

 
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there are two hours

 
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twenty-three minutes

 
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and forty-seven seconds left

 
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until my mother asks me

 
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how my day was

 
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and I tell her

 
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fine.

 
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eppy: It's not, er...it's not really all that bad of a day, is it? I mean, in the grand scheme of things. I'd give this more of a light humorous or self-depricating kind of tone, but that's me. I mean, if it makes the narrator feel the way the numb final line implies, can she then look back on it with a certain degree of self-awareness?

lizzy: Exactly, Eppy.

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