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Wanted:

A man who knows:

Who he is

What he needs

Why he feels how he feels

What he likes

His own limits

The limits of others and

How to respect them

The shape of his nature

His hopes

His promises

His truth.

Wanted:

A man who knows all the above

But isn't sure about any of it.

cgroom: An interesting subject (I wrote on this, too). I like that this is compact, honest, and has a good rhythm. cgroom: Just speaking off-the-cuff, though, you ask the hardest and most important questions a person can be asked. I like the twist at the end -- the necessary uncertainty -- but then everything is turned on its head because this is called "Personals." That implies that both people -- the poster and (implied) responder are jumping into a correspondance between complete strangers using complete self-knowledge as a starting point and... yeah. It ties the mind in knots, in very interesting ways. Not sure if that's what you intended or if I'm digging too much into it. Add comment