Prologue
poetry by
m_brophy
30 September 2002
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Grammars and Geometries
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everywhere
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and we-openings-
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j_moody:
what is this a reference to? is there such a thing as a "we-opening" or is this meant to be "we-- openings"? the repetition later in the poem makes me think its an actual term. |
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m_brophy:
No, it's not a term, but a dash, "we--openings". |
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j_moody:
ohhhh..... as in "we are openings"-- gotcha. |
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spaces in the everywhere.
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Spaces locked in structures.
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cgroom:
I feel like this is the pivitol line, and yet I don't feel its reverberation very strongly in other parts. |
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There are lines drawn
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around my eyes
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by the One.
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The One is inscribed by the Zero.
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The circle around the eye.
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laura:
There's a riff possible on each one of these lines. |
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The One is the First Person.
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The I.
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And we-openings.
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Spaces.
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laura:
Since this is so much about space and openings, I'd really like to see you play with spaces and 'Os' in the lines, so we see those playing in the characters of the text. |
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